Tuesday, March 6, 2012

erotic with you...........


"we tend to think of the erotic as an easy tantalizing sexual arousal. i speak of the erotic as deepest life force, a force which moves us toward living in a fundamental way".....Audre Lorde



bound in a quest 
a hunger never stereotype
i met my freedom 
in your arms
never let free
the ordinance,
the achievement 
inexplicable perceptive powers
arising me intimate and intense.



21 comments:

♥●• İzdihër •●♥ said...

BEAUTIFUL

melissa said...

I believe it the way it has been described in your words and in the video.

It's something that goes beyond sexual arousal. It's a driving force, passion towards greater intimacy.

I'd love to see myself falling for someone ~ so deep. But right now, I enjoy my relationship with God.

A truly sensitive post ;)

Susan Deborah said...

Well, the word 'erotic' itself makes me hot and Mmmmmmm.

Never let free your words, SB. They might burn anyone around.

Joy always,
Susan

Anonymous said...

Oooo erotic indeed..;)

Mani

Rathore said...

Wowwww grt words i feeled your words inside me grt words....

janaki nagaraj said...

Truly beautiful.

Andy said...

My dear Sancheeta,
To be held and to be touched with desire is a natural emotion that all of us were created to enjoy.
Passion starts within the mind first before the body can respond.

There are so many different levels to making love...sometimes lust becomes sweeter when two hearts are craving each other, even in a forbidden way. Imperfection creates this need and want when temptation is there instead of love.

I enjoyed the video and poem very much. Thanks for sharing.

Didn't like word verification though :-(

Harshal Patel (Neptune Hero) said...

Lovely & erotic words...feel romance in each words...

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Rimly said...

Deep and sensuous Sancheeta. Your poems really stirs the soul and the senses.

Alpana Jaiswal said...

Absolutely beautiful,Sancheeta...Passion, a word which involves so many feelings. I feel it when we touch; I feel it when we kiss; I feel it when I look at you. For you are my passion; my one true love.
Passion, it lies in all of us, sleeping... waiting...and though unwanted... unbidden... it will stir... open its jaws and howl. It speaks to us... guides us... passion rules us all, and we obey. What other choice do we have? Passion is the source of our finest moments. The joy of love... the clarity of hatred... and the ecstasy of grief. It hurts sometimes more than we can bear. If we could live without passion maybe we'd know some kind of peace... but we would be hollow... Empty rooms shuttered and dank. Without passion we'd be truly dead.

Martha J. M. Orlando said...

"I met my freedom in your arms . . ." What a beautiful expression of sensuous and true love!
Wonderful!
Blessings!

Corinne Rodrigues said...

Passion - is truly a life force. Loved your words and the video.

Arti said...

Very beautiful creation, written with a lot of love :)

magiceye said...

lovely!!

Rachel Hoyt said...

That is a very interesting interpretation of erotic. I enjoyed it. :)

Shamsud said...

I enjoyed the read. I am sure i will come back again. I you might wish to check few of my poems to (http://iamdirtyineedwashing.blogspot.in/). Not sure if you would like them as we have very different style.

Jan said...

Just beautiful.

crowbloke said...

+following, this blog is so beautiful.

Simran said...

Wow!
Powerful imagery and promising your words ..

Rahul Bhatia said...

A well portrayed erotica:)